Great start on the video portion of the project. The character development is very clear and is assisted by the text well. The text also clarifies the tale, along with the carefully chosen music. The only addition I could think of would be to have some video, although it might not be necessary if you have to force it in.
I like the video. You develop the character more and it provides a good complement to your essay. I agree with Shota, more video would be nice, but overall I think you did a great job.
Great start on the video portion of the project. The character development is very clear and is assisted by the text well. The text also clarifies the tale, along with the carefully chosen music. The only addition I could think of would be to have some video, although it might not be necessary if you have to force it in.
ReplyDeleteI like the video. You develop the character more and it provides a good complement to your essay. I agree with Shota, more video would be nice, but overall I think you did a great job.
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