Try to start cutting down your slides to 3 slides. I think the connection between the music and your argument will be clearer, once we get to the essay.
I was just wandering where you got the music from. What artist is it? I thought it was the Beatles at first because of the tone and voice. But anyway, I really enjoyed the beginning of the audio clip because it was very up beat and almost sounded like a train was coming. I did the same thing, but like Jeremy said, you need to decide which of the pictures you want to include in the slideshow and kind of whittle down the rest of the pictures. My suggestion is that you go with the ticket booth, the train keeper, and the inside of the train. You could even include more detail in the pictures to help the viewer understand what's going on in the slideshow. But, all in all, it looks pretty good. I can't wait to see the finishing touches.
Try to start cutting down your slides to 3 slides.
ReplyDeleteI think the connection between the music and your argument will be clearer, once we get to the essay.
Honestly, I couldn't see the connection between the music and the slides. You should clarify that in your essay. Other than that, I think its good.
ReplyDeleteI was just wandering where you got the music from. What artist is it? I thought it was the Beatles at first because of the tone and voice. But anyway, I really enjoyed the beginning of the audio clip because it was very up beat and almost sounded like a train was coming. I did the same thing, but like Jeremy said, you need to decide which of the pictures you want to include in the slideshow and kind of whittle down the rest of the pictures. My suggestion is that you go with the ticket booth, the train keeper, and the inside of the train. You could even include more detail in the pictures to help the viewer understand what's going on in the slideshow. But, all in all, it looks pretty good. I can't wait to see the finishing touches.
ReplyDeleteThe band is Electric Light Orchestra and the song is Mr. Blue Sky
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